Friday, March 9, 2012

here's what she said

here's what she said
as I drank through the nights
here's what she said
as I cursed the daylight
here's what she said
"you aren't mature enough"
here's what she said
"you are not pure enough"
here's what she said
"I am too much for you"
here's what she said
"there's not enough of you"
here's what she said
as I drunkenly cried
here's what she said
"good-bye, good-bye, good-bye"

--OrbsCorbs, March 9, 2012

(I have not composed in longhand, on paper, since I don't know when. I trained myself to write on the typewriter, then the blessed word processor. This poem came to me after I drew the comic in the above blog.)


Anonymous said...

That's at least Beta, perhaps less.

Take control and she will submit.

BTW - Age and alcohol lowers your testostrone. Start lifting iron, esp. heavy free weights w/deadlifts and bench presses and it will promote testosterone production - so you can give her the Alpha she craves.

Of course, she may have hit the wall, but once you get back in shape and the T starts flowing again - you can look for a younger conquest.

kkdither said...

Orbs, that is beautifully sad. I think my best creative work comes on paper first.

A healthy relationship is 50/50, no matter which gender is involved. Anon, if you are seeking out women who choose to "submit," I feel sorry for the both of you.

legal stranger said...

Orbs, Scotch really works well for insomnia! KK, I found 51/49 works best and vise versa.

OrbsCorbs said...

The incident is old news. The poem hung around for over 20 years for me to find it.

I'm allergic to slcohol. When I drink, I break out: I break out windows, I break out doors, etc.

Anonymous said...

You're confusing submission with abuse - there is a huge difference. Women like some dominence - a little control and some carefully applied force -

You should hear my EX - who is married with kids and then wants to get it back on - do you remember when... I gotta walk away because I won't cause marital troubles -